Friday, 5 June 2015

Twinkling Synonym Poems

Twinkling Synonym Poems

We have been learning to use synonyms to improve our writing. Synonyms are words that have a similar meaning.
We started with the well-known children's poem, 
"Twinkle Twinkle Little Star".

In case anyone has forgotten the original words, here they are:

Twinkle twinkle little star
How I wonder what you are
Up above the world so high
Like a diamond in the sky
Twinkle twinkle little star
How I wonder what you are

We used dictionaries, thesauruses and thesausus.com on the ipad to find synonyms.

Here are some of the excellent poems that students came up with:

Sparkle,sparkle tiny spark 
How I imagine what you are 
Higher up than the sphere 
So far up like clear glass in space
Sparkle,sparkle tiny spark
How I imagine what you are.
(Written by Scutty and Jacko)




 


GLISTEN, GLISTEN, TEENY STAR,
HOW I ADMIRE WHAT YOU OBTAIN,
ABOVE THE EARTH JUST SO UP-RAISED,
 LIKE A JEWEL, UP IN THE BLUE.
GLISTEN, GLISTEN, TEENY STAR,
HOW I ADMIRE WHAT YOU OBTAIN!
                                                    (Written by Hunter and Roger)






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